Anyone who's willing....

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Ok, this week I posted one single in-ring RP for a few reasons. 

- My in-ring RP's, cutting the classic promo, seem to be my strong suit, so im working with that a bit more than usual.

- I am on an inordinate amount of painkillers for Dental pain, and its making me kind of Hazy.  As I told Deming, Baron, and Steph last night, it took me two hours of having the program open before I could even start writing, even though I KNEW where I was going with the RP. It took me another two to finish, and another 30 to comprehend it well enough for editing.  Hydrocodone haze and Dental Pain makes for hard RPing.

That said, with the handicap this week due to the prescriptions, I wanted to know how my RP measures up to my usual fare.  The feedback ive gotten thus far has been kinda fifty-fifty, so if Anyone would be willing to read and comment on the RP for me, Id be very appreciative.  Im trying to get to the very top of my ability, and I can use all the help I can get, obviously.

[Ace "The Bleach" Borger]

Ok, this week I posted one single in-ring RP for a few reasons. 

- My in-ring RP's, cutting the classic promo, seem to be my strong suit, so im working with that a bit more than usual.

- I am on an inordinate amount of painkillers for Dental pain, and its making me kind of Hazy.  As I told Deming, Baron, and Steph last night, it took me two hours of having the program open before I could even start writing, even though I KNEW where I was going with the RP. It took me another two to finish, and another 30 to comprehend it well enough for editing.  Hydrocodone haze and Dental Pain makes for hard RPing.

That said, with the handicap this week due to the prescriptions, I wanted to know how my RP measures up to my usual fare.  The feedback ive gotten thus far has been kinda fifty-fifty, so if Anyone would be willing to read and comment on the RP for me, Id be very appreciative.  Im trying to get to the very top of my ability, and I can use all the help I can get, obviously.

[Ace "The Bleach" Borger]

15 views and nothin?  You want me to say pretty please or something?

[Greenbean]

I feel like there isn't enough in-ring RP's being done now-a-days and it's easy to see why, obviously it's easier to be more creative out of the ring than inside it, but sometimes ya just gotta love people going back and forth in-ring.

Your Roleplay was entertaining, kept me interested and got the point across well without ever giving me the feeling that you was 'milking' your dialogue, that's always good. I thought the dialogue was decent too, it flowed well and didn't seem forced.

My only qualm really would be that it lacked a little detail inbetween pauses. For in-ring roleplays I always think its better to describe the characters actions/movements/facial expressions/vocal tones/fans reactions, stuff of that nature I feel adds to in-ring promo's and just helps you feel what the character is trying to say more, apart from that though, I think it's a solid RP, especially the state your in at the moment with the painkillers and such.