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« on: July 06, 2010, 08:43:12 pm » |
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Ahrima-Good read but make sure ur checking wat words ur using from what i remember u used fell instead of feel and punched instead of punches make sure to double check that
Wildcard-very good read as usual but i have to agree with MDE the ending seemed out of place but as u said thats what you wanted
Nick Riot-i really didnt understand your rp at all it seemed very out of place but thats jsut my opinion the whole letter thing and stuff i know your trying to give a background look at who you are and where you came from it just didnt stick with me maybe if linked it more to whats goin on now it would have stuck more but again its just my opinion of it and others may ha e loved it
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